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I opened the door to a blood red lake
to scared to move I began to shake
There you were just lying there
A cold blunt face, cold hard stare

You're lips began to move once more
As I ran out of that chilly door
I yelled for someone to help me please
I yelled but I did not succeed

By the time I'de arrived back by your side
You had gone ahead and shut your eyes
The paramedics tried as hard as they could
to revive you but it was just no good

I held you as tight as tight can be
I held you 'til all life left me
light turned to dark infront of my eyes
and took all the goodness from my sight

like a child I held the knife to my wrist
Like you had done without a twitch
Then there you were at my door
Smiling like you did before
©2005-2009 ~Darkness-Falls6
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Its about a friend of mine who had tried to kill himself infront of me at school and I felt heaps depressed because I had to tackle a blade off him and I got cut during the stuggle and when I went home that night this is what I had dreamed ...

I changed it because I reworded abit of it that I couldn't get a while ago when I first wrote it.
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awesome, i love it :+fav:

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**__I'm trying really {HARD} not to cry over you ... because every tear is just another [reminder] of how I don't know how to let you go
Thankyou :)

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Did you fucking ask about using that image that I created?

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Don't you have something better to do then trying to make me feel like shit! And yeah I did ask but not you... As I didn't know you created it

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Then who the fuck did you ask? You can't just take what is rightfuly mine. Go fuck yourself. You can't ask anyone except me because i was the one that made it.

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Well if I knew you made it then I wouldn't have used it now would I ... I asked Jordie ages ago.. I've had this pic on here for ages and you never had a problem with it before. You just like causing shit ... Or trying to shit stir people .. It's not working, Myk... And besides I've changed the picture so as you say... Go fuck yourself!

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Really beautiful..and very sad. I really like it.. very nicely done

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"I can hear you in a whisper, but you don't even hear me scream"
Thankyou, this is one of my favourites and one that I hold dear to my heart. Not many people have commented on it though which is disappointing... But thankyou

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Bravery Isn't Being Unafraid.... It's Being Able To Conquer Your Fears... Every Day!

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No problem.It is relly beautiful and reminds me some of my own life so..

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"I can hear you in a whisper, but you don't even hear me scream"
:)... Gawd if that happened to you!!! OMFG... I don't know how I would be able to continue... I shivver and burst into tears thinking about it... I wake up screaming when I dream about it so if something like that actually happened... Fuck

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